Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Last Halloween Section 1

                                                     Section 1

I was home alone with no one there but my dog Tracy. I was watching the TV show American Idol when I heard a knock at the door. I grabbed the candy to give to the children, opened the door with the candy in the other hand. I saw a grown man. He seemed to be in his late 20's. "I'm sorry, do you need help with anything?" I asked. The man kept on staring at me with his beady eyes. "Sir I do not think this is funny." I said "Now if you'll excuse me." I started to close the door when the man viciously grabbed my wrist. Before I could scream for help, the man covered my mouth. I struggled to get out of his arms, but the more I struggled the tighter he grabbed me. I bit his hand and stomped on his ginormous foot. He released me and screamed at the pain. I started to run as fast as a cheetah. When I looked behind me, I saw the aggressive man pull out a gun and shoot my leg. I started to fall down while screaming. Tears started coming out of my eyes because my leg hurt so badly. My leg started to get numb. I tried to get up. I turned around and the man was right behind me. "What do you want?" I cried out. He bent down to look into my hazel colored eyes. " I want revenge." He said in a deep voice.


5 comments:

  1. Cool story! Glad I could help you with an idea! It's really spooky, perfect for this season! Should put people get in the right mood!

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    1. Thanks so much I really appreciate it .

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    2. Cool story I want it too go on until the end now I am curious to know what is the end of the story will be

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  2. Great. I can't sleep, and now I read that!

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